Her Reality

Her Reality (Reyna's Blood, #1)Her Reality by Jaliza Burwell
My rating: 2 of 5 stars

Her Reality is a paranormal fiction about a woman by the name of Reyna. It highlights her experiences within the warrior race and how she never has quite fit in – always an outsider. But when her apartment is broken into and everything destroyed in a fit of rage, she must return to the warrior village she once called home. With everyone against her and a new unknown foe that obviously wants her dead, Reyna must prepare herself for the fight of her life. Enter the Fae and a whole lot of mayhem. Will she be able to survive what they have planned for her?

I would first like to state that I received this free through NetGalley for an honest review. The raw materials for a decent story were there but the writing style was so difficult to follow that it just didn’t click for me. There was an abundance of missing words, incorrect words (i.e. your instead of you’re, here instead of hear), and even instances of the wrong character’s name being used (Rayna was talking to Wyatt and then all of a sudden if was referring to him as Nolan). Not to mention, the tense kept changing from past to present. This made the flow of the story slow to a crawl as it was confusing trying to keep up. Once these errors are addressed, it would be a much better story. As is though, I really had trouble sticking with it.

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